Talk:Park51/GA2

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:15, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a
    1.b
  • 2
    2.a
    2.b
    2.c
    2.d
  • 3
    3.a
    3.b
  • 4
    4.a
  • 5
    5.a
  • 6
    6.a
    6.b
  • No DAB links ☑Y
  • No Dead links ☒N:
    Ref 25: "Simone Baribeau; David Levitt; Nicholas Johnston; Stacie Servetah & Mark Schoifet (August 3, 2010). "Ground Zero Mosque Plans Move Forward After Key Vote". San Francisco Chronicle. Retrieved August 4, 2010."
    Ref 40: ""Democrats split over ground zero mosque". Hürriyet Daily News. August 17, 2010"
    Ref 108: "Notice of Petition" Archived 2010-12-03 at the Wayback Machine., Brown v. New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission, Supreme Court of the State of New York, August 4, 2010. Retrieved August 9, 2010."
    Ref 129: "Caruso, David.AP Exclusive: Backers of NYC mosque appear divided Archived 2010-09-12 at the Wayback Machine., Associated Press. Sep 8, 2010."
    Ref 164: ""61% Oppose Muslim Cultural Center; But, Majority Willing to Listen" Archived August 15, 2010, at the Wayback Machine., Dr. Don Levy, Siena Research Institute, August 5, 2010. Retrieved August 9, 2010."
    Ref 186: "Daniel Halper (August 6, 2010). "Three Senators Oppose Ground Zero Mosque". Weekly Standard. Retrieved August 12, 2010."
    Ref 209: ""Gatestone Institute". Retrieved 8 August 2016."
    @Iazyges: Thanks for taking up this nomination, as well as the five others. I have fixed some of these issues, but Refs 108, 129, and 164 are already archived. epicgenius (talk) 00:22, 10 March 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

Site use
  • 23 had been deemed landmarks and 6 (including 45–47) were pending as of August 2010. suggest 23 had been deemed landmarks and 6 (including 45–47) had applications pending as of August 2010.
  • New York City has more than 11,000 landmarked buildings. suggest removing as the sentence alone is unnecessary.
  • Muslims had a presence in Lower Manhattan for many years prior to the September 11 attacks. At least two mosques existed near the World Trade Center,[8][69][70] and several designated Muslim prayer rooms existed within the World Trade Center buildings.[71] suggest moving this to before the section on 9/11.

Controversy

  • As a recruitment tool for radical Islamists suggest changing this section title to Opposition as a recruitment tool for radical Islamists, as the section is much more about how people opposing the building is offering the recruitment tool, rather than the building itself being one.
  • @Epicgenius: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:28, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
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