Talk:2010 Asian Games medal table

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Pre-FLC review

  • First off, I'm surprised that there are no pictures anywhere on the page. Even if there aren't any good photos from the Games themselves, couldn't a few photos of notable competitors be included along the side of the table? That would look much better than a big block of white space.
  • The opening sentence strikes me as akin to the "This is a list of" beginnings that FLC reviewers have been discouraging for some time now. Most of the recently passed medal table FLs, along with the current FLC nom 2010 Summer Youth Olympics medal table, begin by describing what the competition is.
  • "Kuwait participated under the Olympic flag due to suspension of its IOC" needs "the" before "suspension".
  • "China led the medal table for eight consecutive times in the Asian Game." I think an improved version would be "China led the medal table for the eighth consecutive time in the Asian Games."
  • Medal table: "a 'nation' is an entity represented by a NOC." "a" (second one) → "an".
  • Need an "and" before wushu, I believe.
  • For the ties paragraph, a comma is needed after the first use of athletics. The serial comma is used elsewhere, so it's best to be consistent here.
  • The stripped medal information is currently in multiple sections. I recommend removing it from the medal table proper, leaving it in the changes section.
  • Changes in medal standings: De-capitalize "The" in the first sentence. Also, "has" should be "had" for past tense. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 15:36, 29 November 2010 (UTC)

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